Greenland and Iceland

Jun 25, 2015 14:58
Today, I learned about etymologies of Greenland and Iceland.

Both of them were named by Erik the Red in the 10th century.

Firstly, he gave an island the name Iceland, and tried to marshal residents.

However, he couldn't gather a lot of people because of the island's name.

Next, he gave an island the name of Greenland from his failure, though there were almost no green in the island.

In other words, he lied.

Resultingly, he couldn't gather a lot of people to the island as well.

Iceland has a lot of green, and Greenland has a lot of ice.

These are so beautiful, so I want to go there someday.
No. 1 Shannon's correction
  • Today, I learned about etymologies of Greenland and Iceland.
  • Today, I learned about the etymologies of Greenland and Iceland.
  • Firstly, he gave an island the name Iceland, and tried to marshal residents.
  • Firstly, he gave one island the name Iceland, and tried to marshal residents.
  • However, he couldn't gather a lot of people because of the island's name.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Next, he gave an island the name of Greenland from his failure, though there were almost no green in the island.
  • Next, he gave the other island the name of Greenland because of his failure, even though there was almost no green on the island.
  • In other words, he lied.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Resultingly, he couldn't gather a lot of people to the island as well.
  • As a result, he couldn't gather a lot of people to that island either.
  • These are so beautiful, so I want to go there someday.
  • They are so beautiful, so I want to go there someday.
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